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Review:Aiedail says:
The imagery of the dragons in this one-shot were the most vivid, I think, and with a good result, since a lot of this was hinged on Cho's fear. I find it interesting that she thinks of Cedric in this life-threatening situation; I'm not sure if it's worded quite in the way I would expect to see to someone who's thinking about escape, but its' still an interesting association. Of course we think of the people we love in the time of greatest danger--and I think, though this was a bit of a silly, light-hearted story, mortal fear was still at the heart of it.

Something I'm unsure of is how the theme of flourishing in a time of adversity is part of this story--is it because she got away? or because she's plagued by thoughts of Cedric and her past but manages to live our her current life anyway? I know there's always going to be a certain amount of interpretation with these themes and prompts, but that's the only thing that I was a bit confused about. The others, I thought you did a great job interweaving with a natural progression :)

Good job, fellow 'Claw!

Author's Response: Was it really? I only ended up picking the Hebridean Black because this one-shot originally had another plot, but it stuck with me because I found it an interesting sort of dragon and also because I figured that others would use the Horntail :p. I don't know either if I would have thought of Cedric in that situation if I was Cho, but it seemed fitting enough so I put it in.

Yeah, it's both of the ones you mentioned - that, surprisingly enough, was the hardest prompt to fit in, though that was how I saw it in the end. Thanks a bunch for reviewing, Aiedail, and see you around the forums! W.W.W.W.W!


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