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Review:rogovjm says:
I'm writing this review for the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th chapters. First of all, at the beginning I expected Killian's reaction to the overwhelming Weasley family to be a little taken back. I thought he'd hesitate but he didn't which is proving that Killian may seriously have what it takes. Lucy's duel was positively hilarious. I love how she just barges in there and challenges him to above all things A HOT DOG EATING CONTEST! It is one of the things I would least expect from Lucy but it was great. Molly's devious mind trying to distract Lucy was great and Killian once again proves his worth the way he turned a shade of green but still eats the next bite. Fred's duel was great and I like how Mirabella is portrayed. It definitely shows a more fair side to the Slytherins. That's all for now I guess. 10/10 and definitely going in my favorites

Author's Response: Hi again and sorry for the delay in my response.

Killian takes it as a joke at first. I think after being at school for seven years with a bunch of Weasleys, he already knows them by reputation. Plus, the fact that they care about his being with Molly means that they take him and his relationship with Molly seriously (which, by extention means Molly probably does as well).
Lucy's duel was the most fun to write. A hotdog eating contest was just so silly that it HAD to be done! Afterall, Weasleys are well known eaters, right?

The duel was also a lot of fun to write because of the action and the pace of it. I didn't want it to drag though, or feel like it's too easy. I'm glad you liked the small part of Mirabella, it's not big but it definitly shows that the House wars are a tad less intense in thenext generation.

I'm glad you enjoyed and put this in your favorite; as soon as my writer's block breaks (it's been months now, we should be seeing the end of it, right? ) I will keep this going, I promise!

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