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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Hey Linn!!

Here to review your entry piece!! I thought this was a clever scenario to put our champion in to squeeze in all the prompts!! Good job! I know this was an action packed chapter (which I think you pulled of fantastically -- I am always envious of people who can write action), but it was also humourous. That last line. lolol. Too cute. I think you fit the prompts in fairly naturally for the most part, they didn't really jump out at me like "oh hey, I'm a prompt!" I was a little dubious of Cho thinking back to Cedric in such a intense dangerous situation, but I like that she didn't linger with those thoughts and quickly pushed them down. I did spot one little typo, "The Hebridean Black roared with fury, fire spurting from its flaring nostrils and incarnating several trees nearby." --I'm fairly sure you meant for the trees to be incinerated and not incarnated. :P

Other than that, this was a good, entertaining one-shot. W.W.W.W.W!!

xoxo
Melissa

Author's Response: Hi, Melissa! :) /Was/ it humourous? I think somehow all of my stories end up vaguely funny one way or another, but for this one-shot, it just fitted the story well enough. Dang - I definitely realised that something was wrong, though I didn't realise what it was until you pointed it out. I agree! W.W.W.W.W!

~ Linn xx


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