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Review:RHadley says:
Wow. I can't remember if I've mentioned it before, but you are very adept at building tension in your chapters.

Personally, I think that the motherly nature of Professor McGonagall is very fitting, and very much reminiscent of the character presented in the books, and the philosophical Dumbeldore, combined with the remark about the pawns being in position, is an unusual but still intruiging portrayal of the man.

Another point to note is that your descriptions are very good - there may not be much to describe for example your description of the sunset makes it carry far more weight.

Author's Response: I'm not sure if you have before, but it's always nice to hear some compliments.

I'm glad you agree with my version of McGonagall. Dumbledore is very wise and I often felt like he spoke in riddles with Harry, or at least, he would he never quite say enough. I kind of see him with McGonagall as giving her enough to make her own conclusions. I think the whole pawn idea was sort of reminiscent of Snape's comment about using Harry to die at the right time and there may have been some sort of metaphorical chessboard at some point in the series which led me to that conclusion.

I'm glad you think my descriptions are good. That makes me happy to know I'm doing a good job with that.

Thanks again for your reviews. You're so kind.

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