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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums. I'm wandering around reviewing everyone's entries for Task One. :D GREAT Neville entry! This was definitely an original take on the challenge. I wouldn't have thought to do something like this...Wow. I loved how quickly this story shifted. I felt quite bad for Neville and all he'd been through. How sad to see one of our heroes fall...On the upside, you wrote his downfall beautifully. I loved how dramatic this was. It had me on the edge of my seat. And good job creating an OC to throw in here that really fit with the story. That's always a relief to see a well-suited OC. :] Again, good job! You fit in the prompts and formed a really cool story. Good luck to Gryffindor in the House Cup!

--Emily

Author's Response: Hi, and I'm really glad you liked it! I really wanted to write a different side or a 'what if' parallel to the ending, so I'm glad you felt that it came across. Lloyd was really fun to write too, even though I put him together very quickly!

Thank you for your review! :)


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