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Review:angel_speaks says:
Hiya!

Things got a whole lot interesting haha
I see that you've also made Hermione and Harry Prefects as well. There were two things that I found a little odd (1.) Kaya needed to get on top of Malfoy and be in the room while he changed and (2.) the list at the beginning of the chapter showed Draco's name paired with Blaise's, how is it that he ended up patrolling with Kaya? Was that a plot hole or those pairs of names weren't necessarily assigned to patrol together.

I'm sorry. I'm just curious. I did like that bit with Kaya and Draco in the same room though! Oh, and you've finally introduced the lad! I was hoping for some physical descriptions of him, especially for Kaya since she's your original character (yeh know, just to give your audience an insight as to how you pictured her.) I think that would help your story a lot. Description and imagery! Good job though! I'm definitely loving this!

Happy Writing!

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