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Review:AC_rules says:
LWG! So I've wanted to read this for ages but I wanted to wait until I could read all the challenge entries all in one go before I went through and R&R them all at once... now I'm finally here (a bit late, but not too bad) and I've got to say that I was really impressed with this one!

I've heard some pretty great things, so I'm not all together surprised but I really liked the mix of the third person and third person (I really love doing that in one-shots, it's just really good fun to mess around with it),.. I just wish I could find out a little more about Richard, hmm...

But, ack, I love the whole kind of almost abusive edge to the relationship and how you developed that, especially because for a second he was going to swoop in and SAVE HER FROM HER INSECURITIES but, well, you wrote it so much better than that (and I love the brackets) and, as mean as that may sound, I was glad he messed her up even more.

And I thought it was all quite believable and dealt with really sensitively and well and I just generally loved it. Great entry to the challenge and a wonderful exploration of the belief :)

Thanks for entering and hopefully they results will be up and posted soon! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Aw, thank you for reviewing :3 I completely understand, and I'm just pleased you liked it!!

Heard great things? Well, that'd be a first :P I have to say, I took a bit of a risk doing the first perso-third person split the way I did, and I had to keep the almost poem-like flow (this is sort of why I didn't want to go off into backstories of Richard and Dominique's relationship). It was meant to be like snapshots, briefly capturing what was going on. Well, that's my excuse at any rate xP.

I know what you mean- it's like when you enjoy writing stories like this, and you're asking yourself 'is it bad that I'm inflicting pain on my characters?!' but you're having too much fun ;D. I'm going to look weird if you don't get this as well, lol.

Can't wait to see the results! Thanks for the review again

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