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Review:TyrannicFeenix says:
Nice work there, one big issue, the Champions wand is meant to be as detailed by our Head of House rather than the one listed in the books, so you'll need to tweak that before the deadline.

Good premise, it amazes me that though everyone seemed to take to it at the same time we all managed to come up with different settings. So far I've found no double-ups in the Gryffindor fics.

Everything fits together well and the fic keeps you interested, so good writing there too. Maybe cut it a little short of the flourishing in adversity bit, sort of ended where I think that would have taken place but that's subjective so it could still count.

We're sure looking good on this task so far. Nice stuff.

Author's Response: ooh thanks so much for that feedback. especially the one about the wand! i'll go back and change it. yeah, the theme of flourishing under adversity, at first when i had written it longer, it definitely would have fit but the it went over the word limit so i cut it down. i kept it in there because maybe it sort of fits so yeah, maybe it could still work.

thanks so much! (:

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