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Review:Aether says:
I can really feel for Harry, Ginny and Ron in this chapter. It must be so scary to have lost Hermione, especially since she's pregnant. I'm excited to see how Hermione will deal with the situation. I'm kind of hoping that she'll find a way to out-smart her captors. :) She's kind of awesome like that.

In action scenes, splitting up long paragraphs into short ones can be a good way to replicate the speed of the battle. Long paragraphs sometimes slow the reader down, and they can take away from action scenes.

The drama and the suspense in this chapter is excellent. I've really enjoyed this story, and I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews!

The questions I asked in earlier reviews were really just meant for you to think, you don't have to answer them in the review reply. I feel that it helps me when people ask me questions in reviews because it forces me to think about characters more. Hope my reviews were helpful! Thank you for requesting! :)

Aether

Author's Response: Thank you so much- these have made my night :)
I hope she does do (I haven't decided where the story is going :L)
I'll take what you said into account and try to improve my story :)
Thank you so much for the reviews :D


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