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Review:Melinda says:
Oh God I'm so sorry but honestly I wish the romance could be mentioned earlier, man. I'm sick of the rivalries and want something different.

Author's Response: Well thanks for giving the story a shot and taking the time to review. I'm sorry you're not liking it but I wanted it to be as realistic as possible. I didn't think that they could really get together that soon in the story after hating each other for so long. It just didn't seem plausible to me. I've read other Dramione stories where they get together in chapter one or two and while they were great, it just didn't seem very realistic that two people who have hated each other for so long would just suddenly change their minds. I've tried to keep their personalities as close to the original's as possible and as we know there is a lot of hate and anger between the two of them and so that's why it will take a while for them to get together.
As for the rivalries I assume you're talking about Gryffindor and Slytherin and it's pretty much the same as above. We know they've been rivals for so long and I don't think that would have changed. We know that in the Deathly Hallows the Slytherins are all still very much for Voldemort and anti- Harry and as this story is set only 3 months after that I figure their attitudes would still be the same. The rivalries between the 2 houses and indeed the characters have been such a big part of the books that they really have to be included.
I hope this helps you to understand the story a bit better. Thanks for taking the time to review anyway and if you choose to keep reading I hope the rest of the story gets better for you.

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