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Review:Deltaris says:
First off, I like how you didn't have Neville as the main character and narrator. I feel like this isn't going to be something we see a lot of in this task, and it really sets your piece apart.

Also, the way you've included the themes through Neville's speech is astounding. The manner in which Neville speaks is amazing; it really makes me wonder what happened to him. It's not eloquent or well thought out, it's choppy and emotional. The emotion Neville has when speaking to Lloyd is really touching.

Cruciatus damage. Oh my gosh. I did not expect that. At all. I thought maybe one of the dragons had caused so damage, or something.

I can't even think of what to say. Wow. This is more than amazing, I think you did an extraordinary job in turning the prompt on its head. I never would've expected something like this.


Author's Response: Seriously, thank you so much for this review! It put a huge smile on my face. I wanted Neville's speech to come across as sort of regressive, like a child's perhaps, so I'm pleased that seems to have come across. The Cruciatus curse causing neurological damage also seemed perfectly plausible! Aww thank you, I've never been one for tradition when it comes to writing!

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