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Review:Deltaris says:
I like how you fitted Neville into Harry's role in the tournament. It's interesting to think about, as he was the other baby the prophecy talked about, so one change in the past and everything would've been about Neville.

Have to admit, I snickered at the candle line. (And at 'go Neville you beast!' Great!)

I like your use of the dragon blood! I found that the hardest thing to work in. Good job :)

I'm really impressed with your narrative. You stay true to the Neville from canon, even though he's the Boy Who Lived here. And his nervousness was entertaining.

Good luck!
Del<3

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Wasn't too sure when posting as most of my fics aren't quick spur of the moment works, I usually work for months on each little detail before writing them up, so I was a little iffy on this.

I was almost gonna leave out the dragon blood but thought it might work in there so I gave it a whirl, worst that happens is people tell me it feels out of place.

Also glad the candle line worked, it felt too focused so i wanted to add a little humour to it as well.

Big thanks for reading and especially for reviewing too.


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