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Review:KatnissMalfoy says:
Reading group *facepalm*

Ugh, this story is flawless. And very cringe-worthy. Reading group, Pen, READING GROUP fjdjaldha you are so weird and awesome

Casting: Well, who is that? EHEHE. Not sure.

Grammar: I think I am going to nitpick one sentence each chapter in order not to get too annoying.

Athena knows him though. She threw a coke at his head in fourth year. She doesnít like Slytherins especially ones that disagree with her. And I may have given her the idea to throw the coke.

Athena knows him, though. She threw a Coke at his head in fourth year. She doesn't like Slytherins, especiallys ones that disagree with her (and I maybe have given her the idea to throw the Coke).


Audrey - Diana Argon, short hair. Or Kim from Scott Pilgrim. Normally, she's Kazza, but I can always make exceptions.
Percy - mmm in this story, he's more of a Michael Cera, but I can see Matt Smith or Arthur Darvill stepping up just fine.

Omg this is too funny and great. Eep!

Look at me. Talking about this, like it's a movie.

Author's Response: Little children do tend to be awkward and rather annoying, I think I did them some justice in this chapter.

MATT SMITH WILL ALWAYS BE MY PERCY WEASLEY, as to Audrey, in all my stories she's Karen Gillian, but in this story she's more...sweet? I suppose, so I still don't know who I would choose.

Thanks for the review!

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