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Review:KatnissMalfoy says:
Pen the DJ. Oh god no.

Again, awesome chapter, they all are!

Flawless casting :) Aww, Piper. So cute.

Grammar nitpicks:

"Hey Athena the crowds pretty big and smashed tonight," said Chris then†he noticed me. "Well hello there," he said
offering me his hand. "The names Chris, Chris Smithe." Well if that wasn't an obvious James Bond impression I donít know what is.

"Hey, Athena, the crowd's pretty big and smashed tonight." said Chris, and then he noticed me. "Well, hello there." he said, offering his hand. "The name's Smithe. Chris Smithe."

Well, if that wasn't a James Bond impression, I don't know what {one} is.


Just some commas, spacing, and last-name-then-first-name-last-name. Bond. James Bond.

Well, FANTASTIC story. I like Chris. Casting: John Barrowman, he seems the "Captain" Jack Harkness type.

Then again, not everything is a DW refrence. I should get my mind out of the Rift.

Maybe Chris Evans. Or Jeremy Renner. Not sure.
So long, and thanks for all the fish!

Author's Response: Oh God no is right, it's one of those things that are just getting re-edited, I can't re-read over this story without wincing at that bit. But hey, I'm glad you liked it! Although my mental image of Chris is a bit different then yours, he's more like Chris Martin, I just thought it would fit considering that he's in the music business and I had no idea what else to name him.

So long, and thanks for all the reviews!

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