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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
And she follows me. Every day. All day. Because really, who else would have such a vendetta against me?

^ I'd like to know more about her relationship with her grandmother because she thinks such awful things about her. Also, when she first realized she was a squib and how her parents reacted. I mean, don't get me wrong, I'm having fun reading the chapters but I'd like to know more about her character before this.

I like the character of Moth. Kind of funny that he doesnít like magical creatures but he likes muggle insects? Odd little boy.

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Yet no matter how hard I tugged my at the fan, more hair wrapped around it so my hair became more and more tangled.

^ Tugged her what? Makes no sense to have 'my' in the sentence, I suppose you're missing a word.

Author's Response: Hm. I hadn't really thought about bringing that up until much later on - but I see what you mean! It's easier for me since I know what happened! I have a bad tendency to forget that the readers don't know. I'll start bringing the information in earlier - as soon as this horrific writers block decides to move on!

Ah! Thank you for pointing that out. I'll fix it on my next round of re-edits!

Keira :)

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