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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
I looked like I was about to take flight


I feel like an extra in that really bad Pompeii film Auntie Hermione made us watch.

^ Oh good grief. She's such an angry person, Molly Weasley. I understand why. Everyone is magical and shes a squib. Her father doesn't seem too thrilled about it either but she really needs an off button. Her thoughts are hysterical to me though.

A house-elf with attitude.

^ Oh lord. What is he, a rejected house elf? Cast away to deal with squibs. Not good enough to go to Hogwarts? He was amazing. I love him. He might push Dobby out of my number one house-elf spot.

This story is hysterical and I feel awful for you that you had a professor like that at university. Of course there's always one in the bunch. I had a professor, my first one, who was this old man that got the flu one time and decided that even though he was sick he would still mark all of our papers (he was very grumpy about it mind you, but he was always grumpy). We all got our papers back and they were covered with snot. Antibacterial hand sanitizer was put to good use that day.

Author's Response: Alyssa!

Awh - thank you for reading and reviewing Outcast! It was a really nice surprise on my birthday :P

Molly is angry. But is hilariously angry - half the time I'm not really aware of what I'm writing... there must be an inner-Molly somewhere! Grewner is just... fun. He'll remain in the story and will reappear frequently so you'll learn more about him soon!

Thankfully I never got taught by him - I don't know if I could have withheld the giggles! It was luckily an open day, though I would love to revisit at some point! :D Oh no! Did you wear gloves as well? ;)

Thanks for reviewing and I'll hopefully finish the next chapter soon! Keira :D

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