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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
maybe Gran's spirit got bored and decided to channel through me for a moment.

^ I loved all the bits about her grandmother. I thought they were hysterical. It seems a lot of people like to blame spirits or the deceased when something goes bad in their life.

They say, Mr. Office: It wasn't me! It was them, they've decided to channel themselves in me and make me do it.

That's how a lot of murders pan out, according to the news anyway.

I'm so mad at myself for taking forever to read this! It's really funny and original. I like Molly, she has spunk. I thought her father was kind of mean though. He didn't seem all too interested in her, he just wanted her to do as she was told and that's it. I don't know, maybe I was looking too into their small conversation or maybe the way she sees him I see him as kind of mean.

One thing:

Yeah. We... um... met as a skating rehabitation centre.

^ 'as' should be 'at'

Author's Response: Alyssa! :D

Thank you for reading (and reviewing)! Haha - I'm glad you like it! It's always easy to blame things on people who aren't there... and I just wrote a long reply talking abut chewing barbie feet... deleted it though... some things are too odd to post! :P Meh. The news is always correct. ;)

Oh! Thank you :) Most of the story is written from Molly's (very bias) opinion, so characters are perceived through her rather then... around her? (It's late and I'm shattered, sorry for not making much sense!)

Ah! Thanks! I'll edit that as soon as I post the next chapter (I don't like editing without an update because then people are like 'woo, new chapter'... then get dissapointed when it's just me failing to correct my grammar :P).

Thanks for reviewing - I WILL review yours tomorrow! :) Keira :D


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