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Review:Jchrissy says:
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Okay, I had a feeling this would be a love triangle, but you still tricked me. I thought that maybe they were getting married even though one of them knew they loved someone else or something. Anyway, your play on words is amazing. It was the perfect combination so when you began showing us more of what was happening it all started clicking.

I have a Draco Astoria love triangle written myself, so when I saw the characters in this I was really excited to read it. I'm so happy this didn't disappoint, it was a huge twist mixed with that stabbing, painful heartache of not being loved back. I can feel Daphne's emptiness, feel the horrible breaking heart as she watches her sister marry the man she loves.

It's beautifully written, and kept me enthralled the entire time. Your descriptions were perfect without going overboared, I knew what was happening the entire time but didn't have to read a paragraph about how the flower smelt before I got there.

Amazingly well done, I'm so happy I chose to read this!

Tell me if you are ever interested in a review swap, this is the only other love triangle I've seen with these three so I'd love to get your opinion on my Draco Astoria, Chasing Ghosts.

I love that you had Blaise aware of Daphne's feelings. I don't know why, I just think it was an amazing touch. I also like that Draco is really in love with Astoria, that Daphne's feelings are only one sided. I think it would have been too much if they were both in love but Draco was marrying Astoria, so the way you have it is perfect. It makes for a heart breaking story without too much drama, and really makes my heart hurt for Daphne.

Great Job! Thanks for a wonderful read!

Jami

Author's Response: Hey!

I don't think I've seen many Daphne/Draco/Astoria love triangles either. It makes me want to write another, longer this time. I guess we'll see. :P

Blaise is aware of Daphne's feelings because... Well, the reason would be revealed if I were to continue this. I think about doing so, but I quite like where this ended and I like that I kept Blaise in the know. Maybe one day I will continue it or write a one-shot sequel. :)

I feel so sorry for Daphne, but this is what makes her who she is in my head. I wondered if Draco would feel the same, but it was only brief. He and Astoria are just perfect together, I think. It'll always be one-sided.

Thank you so much for leaving me such a wonderful review. :)

Sam.


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