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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Like I said in the last chapter, I really like how you formatted this with Percy's POV in the beginning showing the start of their relationship and Audrey in the now.

I thought it was kind of amusing how he would pick the restaurant that was closed because of a lose rat. Poor Perce can't do anything right sometimes, can he?

Yikes, Audrey is being tossed to the wolves. She drops that bomb on Percy and he's all like, "Oh, let's go see my family!" Percy, Percy, Percy. I am amused that he would change the subject so drastically and drag her into this, but I am a bit confused. He smiled and was all, 'wow' when she told him she was pregnant, but then he just changed the subject and didn't want to talk about it. It just seemed a bit abrupt to me, I guess. Like Audrey said, it seemed like something important that needed to be discussed and he was avoiding it.

I really like how crazy the Weasley dynamic and how awkward Audrey is. I think my favorite part of the chapter was Audrey and Percy answering the questions but they had different answers! It's hilarious and like a comedy of errors. They can't catch a break, can they?

I was sort of confused by the turn of events, like Ginny randomly accusing Audrey of being pregnant (I'm not quite sure where she would get the impression from and that's certainly not something I would blurt out over the table). I was also a bit confused by the wedding talk. I mean, I figured they just assume that Percy and Audrey would get married now that they're expecting a child, but there was no build-up to that moment so it just seemed out of place to me. I did love the Weasley kids fascination with cake though. It's making me crave some now too!

I also really enjoy Gloria and Herman. I don't know if I mentioned that before, but I love the idea of Audrey living in a flat with a woman who can't even remember her name (though how awkward would it be to live with an 80 year old?) and Herman seems like a good guy. Hopefully he can help Audrey figure out a bit of the crazy in her life!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! :)

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