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Review:married to black says:
For 500 words, that was so, so brilliant. The last line "He just wants to be someone's hero again"... you do not understand how much it tugged at my heart. It felt so surreal, honestly. The way you wove the story and made it flow... it was so perfect. Absolutely and marvelously perfect.

In the beginning, I was so scared Harry was cheating. My heart was so afraid for Ginny. Then when I read on, I started to think he was doing drugs or something of the sort. Then that made less sense as the story progressed and my head was yelling "HARRY, HARRY, WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"

I was seriously freaking out inside, hah. It was just so enthralling and you captured my attention so well! Bravo for you on that. I love the twist you did. It would make sense that Harry would want to be a hero again, someone that another looks up to. He was always into saving people and I'm sure that never left him even after the war.

I like how you pictured Ginny as a wife that trusted and believed in her husband. Most woman would have yelled at their spouse, accusing him of being unfaithful before even asking what was really happening. Ginny's always been so levelheaded and I love your portrayal of her canon personality and consistent of showing her as the way she is throughout the story.

Your grammar and story pacing was so perfect. I couldn't find any mishaps or mistakes. Nothing to critique on either. So good.

This is, all in all, a brilliant one-shot. Aboslutely fabulous. Well-done!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's always so flattering to hear someone call my story perfect, because when I'm writing it it feels anything but perfect. I don't think I could ever write a realistically-cheating Harry; I just really can't picture Harry doing that, y'know? This seems a lot more believable to me and I'm glad you thought so too. And I'm very happy that you liked my Ginny! I wanted to show how her relationship with Harry was really strong, after so many years together, and I like to flatter myself that canon!Ginny would act that way in this situation. I am so so so so grateful for this lovely review :D I am legitimately blushing. Thank you so much!

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