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Review:academica says:
This is so sweet! It's interesting to see Neville as a bystander, not quite full of enough Gryffindor courage to ever tell Luna how he feels. (The funny thing is, I imagine that even if he had come to her on her deathbed and finally told her that he loved her, she would have just nodded and smiled and said something like, "That's nice. It's nice to be loved." So very Luna.)

I really like the vignette style of this story and getting little glimpses of Luna through Neville's eyes. I love how, from his perspective, she transforms from an odd, cute girl into a beautiful woman and the object of his affection. The story flowed nicely and the ending felt right.

Nice job! :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thank you! It was very fun to write. Hmm, HEADCANON ACCEPTED! Haha.

Thank you so much!! *hug*
-Jas


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