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Review:ariellem says:
I can honestly say that this is one of the best stories I've ever read. This is based on Hamlet, right? I prefer this version then the other, just saying.

Now, I'm not really good at giving long reviews, especially when there's not much CC to give and in your case there isn't, but I will try to give you a review you deserve.

First off, I love the way you write third person, whenever I try to write third person it ends up--to me--sounding detached, you on the other hand still give us such an insight to all your characters. I feel bad for poor Regulas, I'm pretty sure that Cygns will be targeting him next.

But the way you write this, the setting, the imagery, the little things. Is just so masterful, I sit at my computer chair in awe. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it's very loosely based off of Hamlet, plus inspiration from various other stories that'll pop up here and there.

I've never really attempted second or first person, so third comes naturally to me. I'm glad you can still connect to the characters, though. I know that second and first relay a bit more of an intimate feeling that's hard to get from third person so I'm glad you still feel insightful.

I definitely want you to sympathize with Regulus. He's going to have a rough life but he will become stronger because of it.

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.


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