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Review:PenguinsWillReignSupreme says:
Oh :(
I think this chapter just broke my heart in a way it's never been broken before. I've read some heart-wrenching angst in the past but this gave me a completely different emotion to anything I can recall feeling after reading a story before. It's like a rather profound sadness and disappointment and curiosity rolled into one.

Capria's character definitely developed here and I really like how you make the loss of her family an echo of her daughter's future. There are a lot of similarities between her and Luna which is perhaps what makes her feel so canon.

I find it interesting that you never name the girlfriend. It dehumanises her a bit and separates her from Capria, whose name is like a part of her (it's a terribly pretty name, by the way). The namelessness also makes her feel less important and blends her into 'a thousand other girls', marking Capria out again as something very special.

Two chapters left! I'm so interested to know why Capria refused the invite to the wedding!


xx

Author's Response: It was rather difficult to write, because it was so sad. I'm glad to hear I didn't overdo it, though. I didn't want it to be a sob story or anything, just a little depth to Capria, to show that she's not always sunshine and daisies, but that she has experienced hurt too. I'm glad that came across for you.

I'm so relieved to hear you say that (about the nameless g/f). That's what I was going for, but I was worried it just got annoying after a while. We're all our own worst critic, right? Heh. Thanks for making me feel better about that!

And thank you, again, for your review. xx


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