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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

Mwhahaha, I am back to read more of this excellent story and there's nothing you can do to stop me! Mwhahaha. Anyway, enough of that.
I'm so touched by how you've written Bill/Fleur's relationship, it seems like they've grown very close even though its only been a month. That time progression was very nicely done as well, with not too many details that might distract from what was happening in the story. :D
But that ending! Like, what? I have to know what was going on and I hate seeing poor Fleur all upset, I hope she won't be too upset with him! Argh, what are you up to? Inform me! Hahaha. Will be looking forward to the next updates, of course.
On my end, I still have a dead laptop but...I will try to hang in there! :(
Much love,

Author's Response: Hello again!

Yes, as you predicted earlier, the course of true love never did run smooth and sadly, Bill and Fleur have hit their first bump! Bill's chapter will be up very soon, and you'll see where he was! As for Fleur not being too upset.well, she's a passionate French woman, you'll have to see where that one goes!

Your poor laptop! Please do hang in there, and I'll do my best to stay strong too! Seriously, even if you have to use ink and parchment and send the next chpater with Hedwig! Until then, thanks again for reading and reviewing and I look forward to the glorious day when your laptop is fixed!

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