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Review:justonemorefic says:
Ooh I saw you have a new story, so I wanted to take a look. Love the Weasley boys 8D

Baww, Bill. Bill and Charlie together would be an utter hurricane. And Bill wasn't even trying to be one. Poor Bill, he has to face ~responsibility~ and he doesn't even get to eat his brownie sundae D: what kind of deal is that?

Eep, Belinda! How creepy, hah, but I love her. She is such a apple-waving witch, like from the fairy tales. I like how you wrote her dialogue, and especially her prophecy. I kind of found it hilarious, just how I imagined it in my head (which is good, I think? xD): She again smiled toothily at the young boy who had gone white as a sheet at her pronouncement. “Now off you go, hup hup,” her voice in its normal rasp. I can totally see Bill just going wut. wut just happened.

BAWW BILL. But when he died, she wouldn’t need to miss him, she would have plenty of other children to love. YOU ARE SUCH A DEAR CHILD.

I'd love to hear more about what's going in his head, feel a bit more panic, maybe 8D Great start to a new story ^__^

Author's Response: Hi Gina!

Thanks for stopping by!! I know RESPONSIBILITY has got a lot of syllables for a youngun' :) and to face that without the bolstering effects of a brownie sundae :P

I'm so glad that you liked Belinda!! She was fun to write about and Bill was totally over his head in what had just happened. You're description of his reaction made me laugh.

Thanks for this!


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