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Review:married to black says:
I've never read an AU before - truthfully I tend to avoid them - but yours looked so tempting so I gave it a shot and boy am I bloody happy that I did. I am blown away by how well written and interesting this plot you have created is. It's only the first chapter and yet it's so well-done it feels like it's a tenth or something chapter in a wonderful old-age Kingdom tale.

I love to read stories that involve Kingdoms and the vicious lies and manipulating that befalls on the royal family. It's so intriguing; power, and the fight for it, creates one of the most fascinating tales. I can tell this story is off to a great start and I bet every other chapter is just as amazing, if not better.

Honestly, I couldn't find a single thing to critique. The grammar, spelling, story flow, characterizations, dialogues... they were all marvelous and just amazingly done. I love this, I love this, I love this! Not to mention, it happens to feature my lovely husband Sirius, so a plus for you on that! ;)

All in all, great first chapter. It was excellent. You're a fantastic writer!

Author's Response: Ah, AUs seem to turn a lot of people off for some reason. I'm glad you decided to give this a chance, though.

Thank you! I definitely wanted to give this a bit of an old-age Kingdom tale with a modern-ish twist. It's a lot of fun to write these characters in this setting, so I'm glad you like it so much.

Kingdom stories are so much fun, especially with a good war going on regarding politics and definitely manipulation. It's interesting to see who the strong characters are or those who may act weak but then come out of nowhere and surprise you.

Heh, yes, Sirius! He is such an integral part to this story and I'm having so much fun writing him as a prince. I really do hope you continue to read this and find more reasons to fall in love with the kingdom and the characters.

Thanks for your lovely review. :)


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