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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
Wow. I mean just wow. This was amazing. In a small five hundred words you've conveyed more emotion than some writers do in entire novels. From the very first words I was on the edge of my seat. At first I was so worried it was an affair, and the Ginny/Harry lover in me was like NO. But then I kept reading, and you started to reveal exactly where you were going with this, and I was hooked.

The amount of charicterization that you shoved into this was really admirable. I felt like I was reading the Harry JKR wrote all over again. I totally see him going out into London and stopping robbery's after the war.

But I think the part that did it for me was the last sentence. "He just wants to be someone's hero again." There has been some discussion on whether the epilouge seemed resonable because you'd think that a war like the one Harry went thorugh would have made him incapable of settling down. He was scarred you know? And I think that sentence radiated this scarred-ness.

Anyway this was really really good.

Hope to see you around the BvB battle again sometime :)

-Liz

Author's Response: You are so sweet! This review really brought a smile to my face. I would never have Harry cheat on Ginny, just because I don't personally believe that could ever happen, y'know? I like this alternative much better ;)
It means so so so so much to me that my Harry reminded me of JKR's, because I think Harry is quite honestly the hardest to write in character - simply because we spent so much time with him in the books that it's easy to notice when he's even a little bit off.
I honestly believe he was scarred; there was no way he couldn't be.
Thank you so much for the review! :D I am so happy you liked this.


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