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Review:Indigo Seas says:
It's random review time, with Rin!

Augh, dear, this was lovely. I mean, really lovely. In leaving all these random reviews, I realized I say that word a lot: "lovely." I'm sorry if it seems excessive, but I really do find it marvelous.

I think the thing that struck me the most (and this may seem a little odd) is your dialogue. It flows really well, and I think it reads really naturally. Dialogue really kills me, and I generally find it very hard to write. So, of course, that makes me even more impressed that you've managed to create dialogue that reads really fluidly.

I love your flow, too. I think it transitions from paragraph to paragraph really well, which is lovely (lovely! Again!).

BAH. You're last line. Last lines kill me. They really do. I love it. I love that it's just... I dunno. There's something about it that I find really appealing. It was a great way to end.

Lovely (lovely!) story, dear. I could read your writing all day.

xx Rin

Author's Response: Thank you, Rin! I'm glad you happened to fall into this story however you found it :) I did work hard on the flow and the dialogue so I am particularly grateful for your kind words. I have a special place in my heart for this story and I'm glad you liked it. Hugs!

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