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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
So here I am with your review!! (Team Bronze)

I adore Molly Weasley's character in canon -- her strength and tenacity, her ability to put everything she loves and holds dear on the line in the hope of giving them all a better world to live in. And this chapter really did her justice, and brought a younger-her to life.

I couldn't imagine being in her position, a young mother and wife having to tend her brother's wounds and not knowing why or how they continue to sustain the injuries. That'd be so, so difficult. I was sort of tickled when I read your comparison between her temper and a Hungarian Horntail since I had a vague Molly-dragon allusion in my last WAT chapter... if the shoe fits, eh?

The end scene was fabulous. Her taking her temper out on Alastor, blaming him... but still taking the pin in the end. It was powerful and speaks of things to come. Poor, poor prewett boys. :( I think my favorite line in this chapter was the one you chose as the summary, about her going down fighting. It really encapsulated her character neatly into a handful of words.

And lastly, BABY CHARLIE.

great chapter!!

Author's Response: Here you are! Thank for you for, though you didn't have to.

I think Molly is a fabulous character and you nailed her on the head in your review. I was a little worried to write her. I don't think she was technically part of the first Order, especially with all her young children, but I didn't think it was fair to leave her out complete.

Haha, I love that we both see Molly as having a bit of a dragon-like temper. She's definitely very fierce and protective and I think she would do whatever it took to keep her children and family safe. I imagined her while writing the scene with Gideon just sort of frantic and worried but knowing she had to patch him up, to take care of him.

I think at the point with Moody she was looking for someone to blame. She didn't like the idea of her brothers going out, doing dangerous things that could get her killed, but in the end, she knew what was right - and that was taking the pin.

Hehe, baby Charlie. I definitely want to try my hand at writing him some day.

Thanks, love!


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