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Review:Calypso says:
I loved this!
Such a sweet story and really well written. I thought that the picture you painted of the Wizarding World post-Voldemort was very enjoyable and quite comedic in places!
Your characterisation was my favourite part of this story. Draco was perfect- still suffering in the aftermath of the fighting and still flawed but nevertheless trying to move on. It was very believable as was his hesitancy about getting together with Astoria. Astoria herself was very vivid (I can just picture her in my mind, with her red coat!) and very original. I liked how you presented her as so bold and sure of herself whilst Draco was more reticent. I also thought you brought across the sense of two barely-more-than-teenagers trying to make sense of a war really well without being too angst-y!
You have a lovely way of describing the tube, really making it come alive and the way you managed to entwine the newspaper with their story was stunning.
The final sentence was perfect. For me, it really summed up the story and left it on a beautiful note.
Thankyou for posting! I loved this and will definitely be adding it to favourites :)

Author's Response: aww, thank you very much! Post-Hogwarts has always been one of my favourite eras to write, but sometimes I have to remind myself it's not all doom and gloom, and that's when stories like this happen. Draco is tough to write, so I'm glad you like his characterisation - equally with Astoria.

really glad you liked it, and thank you for leaving such a lovely review! :D ♥


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