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Review:Angelique Aspis says:
Finally! A story in which Scorpius is not nice! Interesting start. I must point something out to you. The following sentence doesn't mean what you intend:

"Im sure Astoria has no wish for Scorpius to be so far from home, as I did when Draco was that age.

I know you intend for Narcissa to say that she didn't want Draco to go to school in another country, but what you've written is that Narcissa DID want Draco to be far from home.

I suggest breaking this thought into two sentences:

"Im sure Astoria has no wish for Scorpius to be so far from home. I felt the same when Draco was that age.

Author's Response: Aha, I was sat there for ages trying to work it out, but I understand now, I'll change that then. Just to warn you, he becomes a LITTLE bit nicer in the third chapter (I think it's that one :s) but he does go back to being mean again later so if you read it, don't be too disappointed! Thanks for the review :)

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