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Review:StormThief17 says:
*blinks* did you just mention me in your author's note?! Aww you're welcome! This is one of my favorite stories that I got to review as a result of my review thread! Its nice to come across a story I can just go on about instead of trying to figure out how to say stuff.

Anyway, the actual chapter was such a perfect ending!! The whole house of dreams? Stunning. Really a perfect image for what they've gone through. And I'm really glad that they made peace with each other. Its good they've reached "equilibrium" but its not like they got back together. That would have been wrong. The way you wrote it is much more realistic! And great ending! That little sentence about dreams being stronger than grudges was a very solid note to end on. Congratulations on winning Third place!! You certainly deserve it :)

Please keep up your writing! It is really refreshing and unique!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked my story. :)
As for the AN mention, I felt that it was the least I could do after your lovely reviews!!

In this chapter, I really wanted a lot of symbolism to tie everything together and create a circle. Equilibrium seemed the best balance point for the pair, because they were too far apart to get back together.

Thank you for reviewing every chapter, and thanks for the congratulations!! I will definitely be writing more in the future. :)

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