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Review:StormThief17 says:
Ugh, I really don't like Albus! And I mean that you wrote him very cleverly so that I can't stand his cowardice but I also feel sorry for him. Get ready for another gushy review, even though you didn't request ;)

That letter he wrote? Oh my gosh it made me want to slap him! You can't just do that to your girlfriend! Ahh it made me so angry! And the way he acted with his friends? Grrr its so mean! I genuinely can't stand the way he is acting! Such a jerk!! Of course I can't help feel a tiny bit sorry for him. He lost a lot! Basically what I'm trying to say is that this chapter was awesome and I loved it, even though I wanted to put Albus in his place.

The flashbacks were really well done again, I have to say! They helped a lot more than a whole chapter of Albus just reminiscing. I can't wait to read the last chapter!

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!

When I wrote Albus, I felt like he was way too mean and heartless, and it seemed like he had no feelings about the break-up. I'm going to work on his character to make him seem a little more empathetic. I really didn't mean to make him so, so rude, but it just kind of happened...

Thank you so much for reviewing again!!

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