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Review:radicallyali says:
Uhg Jane is so pretty.

Okay. Okay. Im about to read this. And Ill save my mushy feelings for the end of the review.

Oh man Mandy Brocklehurst I forgot all about her. She was a twit.

Ellis is new captain surprise surprise. I feel bad for the teams to come in the next couple years.

IS GEOKAT FINALLY TYING THE KNOT. YES BLOODY FINALLY.

I hate you Im tearing up reading this.

Yes. Mr. Perry danced with Alicia. Im pretty sure theyre my crackship for this story.

I picked you Oh what is that? Just a WATERFALL ON MY FACE.

DURKS BAY OH YM DFGKADJK

I bet the girls at Durmstrang have very lovely thick beards though.

I also bet Liam spoils his kids absolutely rotten.

I KNEW IT. I KNEW MR P AND VALERIE GIG WERE GOING TO GET TO TOGETHER WHEN YOU MENTIONED THEM DANCING TOGETHER AT THE GEOKAT WEDDING.

THEY GOT MARRIED ON THE PITCH OH MY GKLSDFGAJKDADAD STOP

get fresh

Omg that was the perfect ending and Im all flushed and tearing up. Oh my gosh okay I need to pull myself together.

AND THEN YOU GO AND MENTION ME IN YOUR THANKS AND I;M A MESS ALL OVER AGAIN.

Okay. Im about to get sappy and nostalgic for a second. Hide & Seek in the recently added section of HPFF the summer after I graduated high school. And when I realized it was a sequel, I of course went to find Keep Away. And ate it all up. I remember sitting at the desk using the family computer, staying up until ungodly hours reading as much as I could as fast as I could. I was hooked. And then that one fiasco happened and I messaged you on the forums and then talked and then I killed my knee and then I came to visit you and you had Zoup for the first time and Squirt. And thats my bag and Ill cry if I want to.

And I honestly love this story so much. I know I slacked (majorly) this year with reading and reviewing. My life got cray. I was diagnosed with depression, I changed my major, sorority drama, I got my first bf, and even through all that, weve stayed friends, and I think weve definitely proved that our friendship has grown beyond HPFF. Although I still love talking about how insane the characters are. They make me laugh like no other.

While youre thanking us for reading your story, I want to thank you, for creating such a beautiful and vivid character in Jane, with such a strong and vibrant supporting cast. Jane is someone I think every girl could look up to, and she still got her happy ending. You can have your cake and eat it, too. So whoever said that is a dumbhead.

Im not rating this chapter because it made me cry and I dont like that. But this series, both stories in the Jane and Oliver soap opera gets 100/10. For making me laugh, cry, scream at the characters, and for keeping me on the edge of my seat for three years.

Author's Response: Dear Godric it's Godzilla.

I feel bad for those teams too. Hopefully Elizabeth keeps him grounded. That's a lofty goal.

Theyre my crackship of the story. You don't know how tempted I was.

I love the idea of Mr. P and Valerie Gig. there is something so obviously right about it, you know?

HAHA I kind of just ruined your life. Whoops.

It's so crazy how things happen, isn't it? How things just sort of worked. I wrote the story. You found the story. We became friends.

Let's be real. We always have to talk about characters when we get together. It's just natural.

I'm so happy you see Jane as a role model for people to look up to. I like her so much because she has flaws. She makes mistakes. But she does things for a reason and she has a big heart. She has some cake. And she ate it.

Im seriously so thankful to have people like you in my life. You're so amazing and sweet. Thank you for following this story, which was a drug to hard HPFF by Mistress. Aka James. Whoops. Thanks :)


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