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Review:academica says:
Hey! I'm here for TGS Review Challenge #4 :)

I don't think I've been to visit your author page since I read (and loved) 'Amaranthine'. Of course, once again you've blown me away, and reminded me that I really should check out your stories more often.

This was powerful. Wow. I love your characterization of Teddy, assuming he's the husband figure here. I always imagine him to be sort of quiet and broken, because of the loss of his parents, but we've seen in Remus (and Harry, also an orphan) the tendency for a frightening temper. I love how you made use of that and challenged the conventional. You've made him so flawed.

And Victoire! I love her. She's confused and weak and doesn't have the world figured out, and I thought your style here and the use of repetition really made me feel like I was in a tilting hourglass, following her as she tried to make sense of things and mourned how quickly meanings can change. For the record, I think the main Victoire was Victoire Weasley, but I don't know that it really matters to me. My Victoire is a contrasting combination of delicate sensibility and secret inner toughness, both qualities inherited from her mother. You've written her here much like I would.

Wonderful job! I'm glad I got to read this :)

-Amanda

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