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Review:tangledconstellations says:
This. :( THIS: "Heading towards the door, he raised his eyes to meet those of his reflection in the mirror.

"You're really pathetic," he said quietly.

His reflection said the same thing."

The last two chapters were seriously so heartbreaking. The fact that he's becoming more irritable, more angry and more miserable is more than I can bear! Yet, you have still crafted this so wonderfully and really poetically. I don't think he's wallowing at all (well, maybe a little) and I think you've written this really cleverly for me to see that its something more than him being stubborn and childish, because, well, of course it is.

Again, the starry imagery is wonderful. It always makes me think of how a stars light has gone out trillions of miles away before we see it. James has reached his peak and didn't realise it was all about to be extinguished. The tone is as ever so heartbreaking and beautiful, but its really nice to see some interaction with others. I pity James for the fact that he blames himself when he shouldn't. I wish his manager was more sympathetic though, but in a way, maybe he is doing all he can do.

This really is a real gem of a story, and it would be amazing to see where you go with this. :) I see you were on a bit of hiatus, but hopefully this acts as a spurt of inspiration for you!

Laura xxx

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