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Review:dramione_ftw_4ever says:
I hope you know that this is pretty much the ONLY HPFF I read anymore - yes I know I dropped it for forever and a half. But I was busy. -.-'
It was amazing. Truly brilliant. There were a lot of amazing parts in both Keep Away and Hide and Seek. Particularly in Hide and Seek when Jane puts on her skimpy nurse's costume. That was great. OH! and last chapter where Oliver appeared in the team's meeting and where Jane pounced on him. Of course, only after she called him an asshole. Because that's just what Jane does.
Though I must say I wished the epilogue was actually Jane's and Oliver's wedding, not Katie and George's. But ah well (will you make a one shot of it for me? PRETTY PLEASE?) I know I didn't comment as frequently as I really should have, but you know - I enjoy reading the stories. And truly, I loved this duo. Hopefully one day I'll come up with a stunning idea like this. But not fanfiction. It'll be an actual story, that'll sell. Just so you know - this is amazing. This whole story just makes me want to write all over again (it's something I dropped. I need to pick it up again).
Anyways - back to my favourite parts. When they went to the spa. When Ang told Fred she thought she might have been knocked up and Fred wanted to name him Fred. THE ENTIRE EPILOGUE.
In Keep Away? When Jane is made Reserve Seeker. When Oliver catches her when she catches the snitch in the last game. The Halloween escapade.
Well - What else can I say?
Well there's one thing.
Just so you know, I love the chapter pictures and they are all wonderful and beautiful.
You're an amazing author. Tell me when you publish a book will you? This story is brilliant, and it truly makes me want to pick up writing again.
So expect a few more reviews of mine to pop up all over your other stories. ^.-

Author's Response: Aw! Well, I'm glad you were able to come back and finish it!

That really is just what Jane does. I love that she has no reservations with Oliver. She just ... does. I like that about their relationship.

I think if I did the epilogue at Jane and Oliver's wedding it would have to be WAY more than just one portion of a chapter. I wouldn't have been able to contain myself. I really want to do a one-shot sometime. I'll probably post that info on a story I am updating to tell people it's out.

I really hope you decide to check out my other stories! I'd love to see what you think of them.

I'm working on a couple original novels right now and I've published several short stories. Just crossing my fingers and working hard :)

I'll be looking forward to those reviews! Thanks!

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