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Review:tangledconstellations says:
Hey lovely,

This first chapter was so emotional and uppy-downy! :( I really feel for James, because it is so much more than just an injury. Whenever I hear on the sports news something about a player hurting themselves in r/l my heart always goes out to them because it really must be such a bummer and just so not their fault :( In contrast to the really carefree and excitable, adrenaline-fueled beginning, it made the realisation of James injury all the more hard-hitting and sad. He's such a nice guy, too...I mean, if he was a real jerk, I don't think it'd be as bad.

I really loved your characterisation of Harry and Ginny here. I love that Harry got the date wrong - I guess he's got his flaws too, ha ha! They have a really strong connection though, and paternally Harry is awesome. He's kind of just how I imagine him to be, and I think what makes this all the more lovely is that he knows how impacting an injury can be, because he has been where James is.

I love the way you write, the way you don't give us too much information but you really allow us to picture the scenes and whats going on. We can feel the atmosphere just from the bare minimum of the words that you give us, because your choice of them is just super. I can't wait to read more - and see how James is :(

Laura xxx

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