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Review:11whimsy says:
This is fantastic. I am so happy I found this story!! It's a bit weird because I am in the middle of a story about a model-- and I saw yours and briefly panicked-- but yours in completely, brilliantly original. It's genius. You truly have given Arielle a unique voice! It is extremely hard to think of any constructive criticism. I love how you blended her thoughts and actions-- anything you said in all caps made me laugh my head off. Well, the part about her being so frank with her humour was hysterical, too (dry as Voldemort's scalp :) ). Uhhh, the only criticism I have is to throw in some plot twists... I'm predicting Arielle and James will fall in love, (I may be wrong) but if I'm right you should make it a bumpy road. Time to read on!!! :D

Author's Response: What a coincidence, i've never actually seen any oc model stories on hpff. The closest think is probably Beauty Queen by explosion which is actually vaaair different.

Thank you sosososo much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much. At the moment i'm not planning on updating it very soon. The the road will definitely be bumpy and (hopefully) a bit unexpected ;)

*CRINGE-Y SELF ADVERTISEMENT TIME* if you enjoyed OTB and humour then you could check out my new fic The Prime.

thanks for taking the time to drop such a lovely review

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