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Review:Jchrissy says:
I wanted to check out more of your work, and am so happy I chose this one. This story us beautiful and sad all tangled together. It makes me wand more. I want up know what happen, how long she's been dead, everything. But i understand focusing on her death wasn't the point of the piece as much as focusing in her Heaven. Your descriptions are wonderful, and make it so easy to imagine her corner of heaven.

Its so heart breaking when she realizes who the people are, but it balanced out with that internal peace she's feeling so amazingly well.

I wish I could be more detailed with this, but I'm on my iPhone and typing with my thumbs is a pain!

This is a wonderfully written, gorgeous one shot!

Author's Response: Baww.

Thank you so much! Unexpected reviews are the best!! I was going through answering some of my reviews and just told this to Raine, but I definitely had a phase where I was loaded with inspiration for quick, slightly artistic one shots. This story was a part of that phase.

Since starting to focus heavily on my WIP (With All Things, a george/angelina story... self advert aside) I have found myself struggling with the art of one shot writing. I really appreciate this review, because it makes me want to write more one shots.

asdfghjkl; Thank youuu.
xoxo
Melissa


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