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Review:angel_speaks says:
Emesias here with your requested review!

This chapter is not weird at all ^_^

Plot/flow: I think that this story is developing really well actually. It has been consistent throughout and I have yet to find a plot hole; so its safe to say that, in my opinion, this story is flowing quite well.

Characterization: The characters are really going well in with the plot. They're not just jumping from one emotion to the other and they're not just jumping from one idea to another.

There were a few (very few) grammatical errors, but no biggie! Good job with these chapters! I really enjoyed reading them, it definitely kept my attention throughout. I can't wait to read more of your work ^_^ Feel free to drop a request in my thread.

Happy Writing!!! 9/10

Author's Response: Hello! Sorry it took me so long to respond!
Thank you for the review :)
Thanks for the comment about the speed of the plot, I've been worrying that it's too sluggish, but you've reassured me :) I suppose the real test of characterisation will be when the pairing starts to come to life a bit! We'll see then :') Oh, and I'm also working on the grammatical errors :P My betas telling me off!
Thanks again!

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