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Review:blackangelwings says:
i cringed. like, major cringed when her dad walked in. hehe. i was like, hiding under the covers, cringing and snorting like the embarrassing human being that i am.

but, yes! it's different because they are in love! *inserts creepy laugh.* hehe. i like how she forgot about Quack, because that shows she doesn't care about him in that sense. bless.

i still don't like him.

her dad made me laugh in this one. like, how he thought quack was james, which, you know, makes sense, but it still made me laugh. and i sung along with summer. but you know, inside my head.

as you do.

james was just so sweet and well, grown up. like when he was speaking about what you feel like when you get cheated on? aaw. heartbroken.

and quack. urgh, he annoyed me. i liked how it happened though, like the bit with the house elf, and how he's a nosy little person, and listened to summer and her dad's conversation. argh.

i do hope it is the last goodbye.

i mean, i want james and summer together! they're just so cute and aw! i just love them.

can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: i cringed when i realised how long i had left this review without responding to it... i am such a sucky person. i am very, very sorry. but school finished two days ago so now i'm nice and free to respond to reviews and whatnot :D

ahaha, i literally have hysterics whenever i see that you've called him 'quack'. she doesn't really care about him in that way, you're right. so they're nice and done and caput.

i kind of got that impression :P

you sung along with her inside your head? oh goodness. love, there are special places you can go when you hear voices inside your head, you know... but yeah, he never really saw james and jack's faces, so he just got the pair of them muddled up.

you're strange :P

yeah, james was the mature one in this chapter. he did have to act like the grown up one, because summer sure wasn't going to.
you know, i've been getting the vague impression that jack annoys you... yeah, i was just trying to show how different jack and summer really are. but he payed the price for being nosy, didn't he?

i'm sure a lot of people do, love :P

i want james and summer together too... i just love writing the pair of them :D

the update is in the queue now :D thank you so much for the review!

ellie :) xx

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