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Review:magicmuggle01 says:
Hi.

This is a very good start for your first attempt. I think you have Snape down really well with the way he acted towards Harry with the comments of contempt he always feels. Though you did take me by surprise when he seemed to suddenly show a slight flicker of sorrow for young Harry.
Yes you are of to a good start with your first fanfiction and I look forward to reading more.
One more thing before I sign off. If you could be a bit more descriptive with some of the situations, you'll find that the story will go a lot further. 9/10 and adding to favs.

Author's Response: thankyou, i have tried to be more detailed in this next chapter. The chapter is ready to be posted. but the site won't let non trusted authors to post any more chapters at the moment :)

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