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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
I know I mention this every time but blah blah blah, I don't care. I simply love the way you begin your chapters and this one was your best so far. It was so deep and ...honest. It really made me think about my own family (who are all completely awesome and I love very much. Every single one in the whole giant thing.)

I thought the hidden files part was quite cool and clever. I also enjoyed the bit about the organization of all the files. That totally happens all time.

I really hope you don't end up extreme when it comes to the Weasleys reaction to Rose/Scorpius. I hate it when they are extreme: either everyone accepts Scorpion or they all despise him. I feel like the reactions should be mixed, depending on personality and upbringing.

I liked the interaction between James and Taylor. I like how they aren't "falling in love," but Taylor is acting a bit different around him - changing her rules. It's not love at first sight - or rather, resight - but more of a subtle thing where I'm not sure if they lie each other or not. I'm curious Trondheim out more about how they were in Hogwarts.

I'm intrigued by James and Ginny's relationship. I hope you continue to include brief scenes from James's third person perspective. I think it really adds something to the chapter.

Lovely job, as always.

-Laura

Author's Response: Haha, you can keep saying how you love the beginnings because I seriously have way too much fun rambling on about stuff like that. I'm glad it seemed real, I based it all off of my own family stuff and was hoping that would make it more realistic and relatable. Taylor and James' families will play a huge role so I wanted to make sure that I focused a lot on their dynamics since they both have family stuff to overcome.

Yay! The files worked! I wasn't sure whether or not it was realistic or just something that made sense in my head. That happens way more than I like to admit.

In all honesty, I'm still trying to figure out how everyone is going to react but I promise the reactions will be varied. I agree that it's not very realistic for them all to feel the same way about the Scorpius/Rose relationship so I'm just trying to figure out who's pro, who's con, and who just doesn't care. There are three reactions that I know already, two of which will be very extreme.

I don't think it would be very realistic for it to be love at first sight. They are both too stubborn and way too guarded for that but they bring out a different side of each other than they are used to for sure. As for whether or not they like each other...I don't really know either so I think it's safe to say that if they do, it's still buried very deep in their subconscious.

I actually already have a few flashbacks so those will make appearences pretty soon. Their different lives at Hogwarts will be something they have to overcome and let go of.

I'm glad you like James' story! I really enjoy writing it so it will definitely continue to be a part of the story. James and Ginny's relationship will continue to develop.

I'm really glad you liked it and thanks for the review!


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