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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Scorpius knows! Scorpius totally knows how much they LOVE eachother! Or maybe Mariah told him she fancies Albus and Scorpius is trying to get Albus to see it too.

Or I could be all wrong. They're a fantastic couple either way :D

The next morning brought the loss of the blasted sling, which Albus nearly choked to death on because he ripped it off too fast and got it caught around his throat.-- WHY does this not surprise me in the slightest?

And he's worrying about homework!? That boy is insane. But I think we already knew that.

haha.. he would be too scared to get revenge on Scorpius :p

Aw, her toad was in his bed? haha.. maybe they are just weird enough to be together. It's sad that Kelly doesn't like Lucy! I suppose though that no one can really like everyone. Even though it's funny to watch Kelly try to catch Scorpius' attention and fail miserably at it :p He's gay, right? I mean.. the 'normally I wouldn't mind men in my bed' comment sort of gave him away :p I love his and Albus' bromance! It's almost as awesome as Adam and James.


I loved Amelia's sweet talking to her brother! It was funny and really believable.

You should make the chapters longer! I need more Albus/Mariah and James/Amelia and NOT James/hisstupidgirlfriend.

I can't wait to read more♥


Author's Response: :-D Scorpius does know hehe but sadly Mariah and Albus don't they're both oblivious, although maybe Mariah may have mentioned some sort of feelings towards Albus to Scorpius.
hehe Albus is an idiot isn't he? *sigh* I do love him :D and yes quite clearly insane!
I think he's terrified of getting revenge on Scorpius because he knows Scorpius would get revenge back.
Oh Mariah's toad toby haha *chuckles in the corner* He's going to be making Albus's life hell through this story.
I know! it's more Kelly being jealous then anything Lucy has done sadly :-(
Yep Scorpius is gay, he has a soft spot for Adam but I didn't tell you that hehe.
Yay! I'm so glad that you're liking the bromances, I'm not sure which one is my favourite out of the two though haha possibly James and Adam are my favourite too hehe.
I shall make them longer I promise! This fic seems to be mainly Albus/Mariah at the moment, I need to include more James and Amelia, don't worry there won't be James/hisstupidgirlfriend for long hehe.
Thank you so much hun! you always make my whole life with your reviews!! :-D

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