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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Hi! I'm here with another review :)

I know that awkward 'what now' feeling when you're watching a fight, and I thought Minnie's reactions of it were very accurate. I loved how all of her friends just made her go and talk to him. And they all had valid reasons too, which I liked; you didn't have it just 'hey let's make Minnie go to cause tension' but it was actually a legitimate point that she needed to be the one to do it.

I thought it was funny how painful it was for Minnie to be nice to Dare. The angst was really well written and Dare's rant was completely understandable and relatable. I think you've done a really great job giving him a voice as an OC as well as Minnie, and Nat. I love all of your characters!

I finally got you to stop hating me ♥ I didn't miss that! That's all I'm going to say on that little part but I thought it was sweet.

And then Eli has to go and RUIN EVERYTHING! But it was funny. Nat's reaction was the best, though. There's just so much tension there that the second it may get acted upon all of their friends pounce.

Her little disagreements with herself are entertaining. Every time she goes 'It's not like I cared about him or anything' it made me give one of those 'yeah, sure Minnie.' smiles. You're doing a great job, whether it's your intensions or not, of building up something between them that keeps me cheering endlessly for them.

As always, I thought this was great and I can't wait to see what happens if they have Defense together! Keep up the great work and re-request!

-Julie

Author's Response: Hey there!

Hahaha, yeah I've had far too may of those awkward after-fight moments to even count, so most of Minnie's reaction comes from personal experience. Although she does have the type of friends who would make her go just to cause tension, I prefer it when there's an actuall reason, too.

Painful, indeed. Hahaha, but at least she's trying, right? And that was just a glimpse at all of the angst Dare's got bottled up. That guy is just as screwed up as Minnie is, if not more. And thanks! I'm so glad that my characters are coming through and that you love them. :)

Hahaha, I had a feeling you'd like that bit. And I am intentionally building "something" up, although I try to be subtle about it. Hence, that little sentence being hidden between a bunch of dialogue. ;)

Thanks again Julie and I'll definitely re-request!
-Camila :)



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