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Review:xxstaindrosesxx says:
This is a very lovely fic. I love the way you managed to take small scenes throughout Bill and Fleur's relationship and turn it into something quite amazing. It seems honest, and painful, like any relationship would be during a time of war and grief.

The way you captured Fleur was absolutely perfect. Her attitude, her fits of anger, and even her dialogue. It can be so hard to write people with an accent, so kudos to you for doing that rather well.

ďFred made me who I was, being a git isnít useful unless you have a matching git by your side." - That made me crack up so bad! Haha. I think that is definitely something George would say, and since it's his first joke since Fred died, it seems even more fitting. I think no matter how hard times got for him, that he would still somehow crack a joke here and there, just because that's who he is.

Perhaps the funniest scene was at the end when Fleur mentions being sick and Bill is freaking out because he doesn't understand. I love that something so special could be taken so wrong when not interpreted right. That was quite hilarious.

I guess the only thing I have to question is where it mentions Teddy being part werewolf. I do believe that werewolves are made, not born. I thought that was mentioned somewhere in HP at one point in time, that the person had to be bit, or at least that their was no evidence it actually passes on to children, that they were aware of. If that was your own take on it, then that's fine. I just wanted to point it out otherwise.

There might have been a few typos too, but nothing that distracted from the overall story.

Overall, I really enjoyed this fic, and it is the first Bill/Fleur fic I have every read. Also, good luck with the contest!

-Sara-

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, darling! It was so wonderful!

Ahh, I didn't mean to say that Teddy is a werewolf, I meant half traitor (Tonks, whose mother is a blood traitor) then half werewolf (Remus) so they would most likely kill him for being their son. I do definitely get how it can sound confusing. I may need to take a look at that!

Thank you again for the absolutely lovely review, m'dear! It brought a huge smile to my face!!


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