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Review:Keira7794 says:
Hello!

I'm just popping in to review your entry for the 'Ronald Weasley Challenge'. As you know, the idea behind the challenge is to take an event and give reasons for Ron's behaviour - to make the reader connect with him in a way they didn't before. I think you did a great job of achieving this!

I really liked your description of the after-affects of apparation. It's never gone easy for Ron (bless him) and I think the descriptions of him being weaker really tie in with his physical state of living on very little food and travelling long distances.

Fleur's reaction seemed to be a normal respone if you were living in a warzone with one of the biggest blood traitors - I liked how Bill didn't immediately run to his brother's aid. His characterisation was great!

Ron's language seemed very in tune with his character - you don't shy away from using slang or crude language which is very Ron! ;) I also like how he immediately classed himself as a coward - Ron is always thinking negatively on himself when it's often not true! :)

The relationship between Ron and Bill is great - Bill acting out the 'wise older brother' role.

"If this war was going to teach him anything it was that forgiveness is a strength as much as redemption is."
^ Love that line!

Anyway, a great entry and the results will hopefully be up soon! Keira :)

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