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Review:tangledconstellations says:
If ever I was to have a nightmare like that, I think I would be too scared to go to sleep ever again!

I mean, they say that dreams are reflective of emotional stress you're going under, so I just feel for Lily a million times more. She is going under the epitome of mental catastrophe, and it would be impossible for it not to strain on her at all. But, oh, she is so strong, too. I love that even though Lily is struggling she places everything on hold for Harry, no matter how annoying and naughty he is being. She is the perfect mum, the mum she never was in canon. I'm glad you haven't neglected her motherly duties, because they are most important of all. She even pushes back her own emotions for Harry. Gosh, she is so strong.

It is really sad to see Melora getting weaker and weaker, because it's not fair on Lily or any of them, and the fact their so helpless makes me as a reader feel helpless too. It's such a difficult position to be in. Emotionally too that has got to be so draining, because all the effort Lily has put in is eventually going to be forgotten. It will be nice for Dumbledore to put in a celebrity appearance though ;) I always think of him as the answer-giver. I hope he will be able to shed light on Melora in this instance, but at the same time there is this overwhelming sense of panic about it all too. Get here, NOW Dumbles! Fix this!!

As for Snape leaving - I don't know how I feel about it. I feel as though he is a little wrong. It's not all or nothing, it's...I don't know. There's got to be a middle ground, or he's got to be patient, or...I just don't know. I feel just like Lily. I hope maybe he'll know when to see her though, and will know when everything is right. He isn't there to be just used, he should know that. Oh, Sev. I wish you would stop with the self-loathing, just for once, and understand that Lily needs you too.

The dynamics of everything in this fic so far are crazy awesome perfect. Each chapter is so incredible at manipulating and fixing me where you want me to be. And, as for the next one...I don't think it can come soon enough!

Laura xxx

Author's Response: Thank you, I am thinking very carefully about what Snape's next action might be. I do think that this more immature and untested version of Snape might well storm out in this way when he feels used. Thanks especially for your comments on Lily as a mother :) She does have that lioness bit going for her... who knows how long she can keep it up, especially if she were to push Severus away by force? Hmm. I'm thinking aloud here. Thanks again!!

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