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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Ah, Rachel! I knew you are the master of the 500 word one shot so I scurried over here for the third round of the ultimate review challenge. :P I loved that this story could be about any of the multitude of student who faught in the Battle of Hogwarts -- they all lived through such horrible circumstances. The fact that you don't identify them really speaks to the fact that they could be anybody. I love the use of You and I and He as the main characters of this, too. That's a difficult construct to maintain, but you did so admirably.

(I was totally trying to write a 500 word review, and couldn't even do that... so even more props for writing as many 500 word stories as you have. :P )

xoxo
Melissa

Author's Response: Master, you say? Baww, I blush. ♥ I love writing these stories, and sometimes it's easier to write 500 words than try and come up with something coherent for more, if that makes any sense at all, so there you have it.

This came from a scene that kept replaying itself in my mind from the DH Pt. 2 trailer, perhaps a month or two before the movie's release, and I saw it so /clearly/ in my mind that I knew I had to write it out, make sense of it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! :) I have vague OCs in my mind, but really you're right -- this is very much an everyman story, and I sort of like that. It's really whoever you want it to be, OC or canon character, male or female.


Writing with varying points of view, too, is something I've been tackling in one-shots; I suppose that's part of the experimental side of things, which can almost be traced back to around the time I wrote this! But anyway. ♥ Seriously, thank you so much for reading this for me, and I'm so happy you liked it. :D And thank you for being such an awesome friend, as well!


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